Sunday, October 18, 2009

Goldilocks 3rd Person

One day, Goldilocks woke up surprisingly early and decided to check her letterbox. Inside was just the usual flyers. She pushed around a bit then found a letter underneath. She opened it and read it:

Dear Goldilocks

You are invited to come to our house-warming party on the 12th October. Our new address is
10 Oakwood drive,
Windy Forrest.
The party is starting at 6:30pm.
Hope to see you there.

Matt and Georgina

"Oh," thought Goldilocks, "It's the 11th today." So Goldilocks went out to find the Windy Forrest Shops to get some new clothes for the party. She'd never been into the Windy Forrest Before.

As she was looking for the shops she came accross Oakwood Drive and thought she'd have a look what the houses were like. Seh came accross what she thought was number 10 but it was actually number 11 because there was a long driveway going behind number 3, leading to number 4.

She knocked on number 11 and there was no answer. She shouted "Hello? Is anybody home? Matt? Georgina? Its Goldilocks here!" But there was no answer so she decided to try to open the door. She thought that it would be locked if they were out. It was open so she walked in. She suddenly felt very dizzy so she sat down on one of three chairs. It was way too big! She moved to the next chair, it was slightly better but still too big. She moved to the last chair and it was great. It was really comfortable. She sat there for 10 minutes and then the chair broke. "Oh no!" She said. "I'll have to replace that!". She stood up, feeling better again, but quite hungry. She thought she'd go home to get something to eat when she smelt and extroadinary smell. She was wondering if it had been a good idea to try and find number 10.

Inquisitively, she pushed the door where she thought the smell was coming from open. There was three bowls of porridge sitting on a table. Each bowl bigger than the last. She tried the biggest one first. "Eww that's disgusting!" She exclaimed. So she tried the second bowl. "Better, but still not great" she stated, disheartened. So she went to the third and finial bowl. "Mmm this tastes lovely!" So she ate it all up.

After this, she was feeling really tired so she walked down the hallway, up the stairs, and saw an open door with three beds inside. She lay on the first and biggest bed and it was too hard. Then she tried the second, middle sized bed and it was too soft. She lay on the smallest bed, and it was just right. She fell asleep then was suddenly awoken by the sound of the door slamming. She heard a high pitched voice saying "Oh no! Somebody's eaten all my porridge up and broken my chair!" Then a low grunt replied
"Don't worry son, you go up to bed and we'll sort this all out." None of these voices sounded anything like Matt or Georgina's. Goldilocks was getting worried. A small bear walked into the room then saw Goldilocks. "Somebody's been sleeping in my bed, and they're still there!" He shouted. Goldilocks screamed and then ran out of the house as fast as she could and never returned. She was never going into anybody's house when they're not there again!

1 comment:

  1. That's a good start Jo. Thanks for helping organise the blogs.

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